Your English grammar and semantics are in need of a serious brush-up...
Despite that, the story seems very interesting.
Your English grammar and semantics are in need of a serious brush-up...
Despite that, the story seems very interesting.
I know.
It's not bad... but it's not great either...
Don't take me wrong, it's by far one of the best currently in the Under Judgement portal.
I'm just a bit biased against animation based on presets, like the mouth movements which were just a repetition of premade frames. I just really don't like the way it looks, even though it seems to be a popular way to animate in other flash-based-content websites.
It's also VERY slow-paced for something that's 15 minutes long... I'm not gonna go too far into that, as some people may actually like that, but it's just not my cup o' tea...
All-in-all though, it's a great submission to induct yourself into the NG community with!
Welcome to Newgrounds! I know you're gonna love it here!
I agree, it is slow. This was the second animation I finished and I'm still a complete novice. I'm trying to make better paced cartoons. With the mouths, to be completely honest the switch layer mouth is the only technique I know for mouth and eyes. I'm still learning.
Thanks for the critique and the welcome.
I had to stop this video so many times... mainly to either dry my tears and stop my belly from aching!
THE. FUNNIEST. HALF HOUR. I'VE SPENT. ON NEWGROUNDS!
Amongst all the randomness and references, this video is just awesome!
Well, we're absolutely glad you liked it! Hope you stick around for the third season. It's not only going to be funny, but we have a shocking surprise for everyone. Good or bad, it's going to be surprising... ;)
At first I was like "Yay, bunnies!", then I was like "Oh no! Why'd you kill the bunny?!" and then I was like "Cool! A Dragunov!" and then I was like "Why would waste a Dragunov's bullet on a bunny?!"
Heh...
Jokes aside, this is pretty cool! I love that you had codeblackhayate as a voice actor for this!
Keep it up!
Yup Codeblack is working on the next animation. I hope she finishes the line soon because I'm almost done with the action parts
Pretty nice! And that hair! XD
Thank's! Yeah Yasuo has a wild hairstyle :D
Can't wait for it!
(Don't really like teasers, though)
well sorry but you have to wait a lot… I mean aaaaa looot….. lol xD
This is pretty softcore for something tagged under "scary". (Seems cliché, but maybe add at
least one jumpscare?)
It shows some potential, though. You might be on to something here.
Thank you.
Pretty cool!
The art style kinda reminds me of Gorillaz.
Really nice song, mate!
Thanks!
Gorillaz are a big inspiration to me
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